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Your face smiles,
Your eyes don't,
Your mask outgoing,
Your heart doped.

You look to me
You search your face
Reaching, Striving
towards my base.

But like a pond in sunlight
You cannot judge,
Just how far I see beyond
your make-ups sludge.

You look to me, I quietly reflect
Your every shape disgrace and angle
All of it I inspect.

You walk away from me
forgetting I still stare
you turn and glance on departure.
Dont worry I'm still there.
leanne murphy 2012

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:iconasianstateofmind:
asianstateofmind Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love it, the mirror being a judging character in this poem, absolutely genius to make its sole purpose the star.
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leanscribbles Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student Writer
yeah I think the judging always watching idea is what I was trying to express
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:iconasianstateofmind:
asianstateofmind Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was amazing detail. :)
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:iconleanscribbles:
leanscribbles Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you
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:iconasianstateofmind:
asianstateofmind Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome ^^
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SoScripturient Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student Writer
LOVE THAT!!!
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leanscribbles Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks :D
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012   Writer
I like this very interesting take on a mirror - one usually hears of the mirrors being flaw-revealers not 'friendly' towards their owner.
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leanscribbles Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student Writer
im not so sure as to whether it's friendly or just all knowing and judgemental.., ruminating
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012   Writer
It came across as friendly in the end, the I'll always be there sense of things.
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